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It is so cold here where I am
the metal of my rings feels like ice on my fingers
the one that changes colour is black
I don't have a jacket to put on or I would

I'm uncomfortable
still the cold can be warming
a blanket hugging my body close
just makes me want to stay
unmoving
in ice forever
©2003-2009 ~broken-ren
:iconbroken-ren:

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This is dedicated to frozensyne....
look her up :) She is a wonderful artist :)

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:iconbarniesboy:
I like this a lot, very moving and emotional, I like the line about the icy rings on fingers the most I think
:iconfrozensyne:
:) a peom dedicated to me
thanks ren :D
Love the poem
Ice :D

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